Friday, May 30, 2008

A glance, a smile.

There were more than ten things running in her mind, she was walking back home after another boring day. she wore the long frown, that has got on her for a few days now. A few steps down the road and she feel little droplets on her shoulders and sensed the fragrance of the mud, the typical smell of first rains. She pulled her hairband off and continued to walk at her usual pace unmindful of the drizzle - frowning, tired and irritated. she walked across the road and took left to the main road. The yellow street lights, the green cover on both sides of the road and the unusually calm surroundings made the road look scenic and pleasant. A dark figure walking towards her on the same side caught her attention. She watched on with her eyes fixed till the image became clearer. He was tall, he had his i-pod, track-pants and sneakers on and was sweating. She couldn't quite help the full attention that she gave, not her usual self. She liked the fresh young and cool look. He went past her without a blink, without a grin. He took the turn that she just came by. Seconds later, she turned back to get a last glance and he turned back too. It was dark for him to notice her smile. She smiled wide. She smiled all the way back home while the skies poured out and drenched her even more in happiness.

4 comments:

Sathya said...

hmmmm...so cinematic, but nice descriptions...

Arun Sundar said...

Such a nice post to explain the process of 'sight-adichufying'!

Anonymous said...

Isn't this supposed to be written in a diary :)

Sorry...just being over-smart !

But love the way you bring nature in all your writings

Wonder who that lady is ;)

Priya said...

:)
was trying to express a very little, call it even cliched but captivating moment with as much observations as possible.

@ arun, yes yes. you may call it that too :P

@ anonym,
diary? im done with diaries long back!